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Part Two

A Wish Come True Part 2: Consequences

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The story so far...
 Akane got a wish.  Akane made a mistake.  Akane never met Ranma.
 But Akane kept her memories.  Oh My!

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 Akane was still on her knees in the garden.  The quiet was disturbing.
  She had stopped sobbing and was just crying quietly.  <Ranma, I didn't mean it,
 It wasn't supposed to happen like this.  I was going to make a wish and we were
 going to be happy and never have to worry about Happosai or Ukyo or Cologne or
Shampoo or Kodachi or Kuno or anybody.  Ranma... where are you?>
 Akane stood and walked mechanically back into the house.
  She entered the parlor and sat down on the couch, mulling over
 the time since school.  She had been so angry at Ranma.  <What
 had he done again?  Oh yeah, he was hanging all over Shampoo and...
 no, that's not right, Shampoo and Kodachi were hanging all over him.
  Then he ate Ukyo's okonomiyaki, and then he came over to eat with me...
 and he brought UKYO!>
 "Oh yes, he was truly doing some horrible things today wasn't he
 Akane-chan?"
 Akane turned around to find the goddess of the past glaring at her
 with a look so cold Akane thought the temperature inside had dropped a few
 degrees.
 "Yes, Akane, I must admit.  Ranma was truly deserving of that wish,
 what was it he did again?  He ate lunch with you and his best friend?
  That would be one of the most unforgivable things a man could possibly
 do to me."
 "Who are you to judge ME?"  Akane's temper was flaring at the
 condescending woman who had given her that magic ring.  "This is all
 your fault anyways, that magic ring that you gave me.  You knew what
 was going to happen, you knew that Ranma would get me mad and that I
 would accidentally waste that wish just to get rid of him."
 "I am Urd, Goddess of the Past and of Love, Second Class,
 Second Category; limited, and I will judge you as I see fit.  So
 don't go trying to blame your problem on me.  I know the past, Akane,
 not the future, the future isn't set anyways so even if my sister was
 here there was no way I could've known just how stupid you would be.
  Don't start blaming me, and don't start blaming Ranma for something YOU
 did.  You are always claiming that you are a martial artist yet you lack
 self-control even more than I do, you attacked Ranma on a daily basis whether
 he did anything or not.  If he looked at you, you hit him.  If he looked at
 anyone else, you hit him.  If he insulted you, you hit him.  If he was nice, you
 treated him like he had a mental illness.  I checked up on you Akane-chan.
  Something I should've down before I ever agreed to that wish, but I'd already
 done that..."  Urd stopped for a moment to catch her breath, and calm herself down.
  "I started to like you Akane-chan, because deep down I'm willing to bet that
 you are a good person, even if you are possessive, angry, paranoid, and jealous.
  Heck, I'm most of those things myself.  Claim responsibility for what happened
 Akane, and mean it, and I might consider trying to help you."
 "Urd, I... I'm sorry, but... Ranma he just got me so mad that... I just
 wasn't thinking... I mean, I say stuff like that all the time, and even if he
 gets mad at me... he would always just... I would just have to..."
 "Sorry can't fix everything Akane-chan...  The best I can do right now
 is tell you how your life went so far."
 "But if I never met Ranma, then how come I remember everything."
 "That's part of the wish, Akane.  There are beings out there that also
 grant wishes... when they change the past.  The person who made the wish changes
 with it.  When we do that, the person is excluded from the shift.  Otherwise they
 wouldn't realize that they'd made the wish."
 "So... where's Ranma now?"
 "Ranma is living happily in Nerima..."  The Goddess suddenly looked
 rather smug as she gazed at Akane.
 "He's still in Nerima?  Then I can find him and we can be happy and
 everything will just the way it was before, you'll see."
 "...with Ukyo."
 Akane's face fell and she looked ready to cry again.  "But, but why?
  I mean, wouldn't his father remember about the engagement to one of us, either
 me, or Nabiki, or Kasumi?  His dad was always really adamant about that engagement.
  I mean, he wouldn't let Ranma live with Ukyo, he just wouldn't."
 "That's just it Akane-chan... Ranma didn't get to the dojo that night..."

~~Flashback~~

Two years ago...

 A panda and a red haired girl with a pig-tail faced off in the street of
 Nerima.  It was raining hard.
 "I TOLD YOU POP! THIS IS NO TIME FOR FIANCEE'S!"
 Having said that, the redhead leapt up and landed a kick on the panda's
 face sending it flying into a street sign, where it collapsed in a heap.
 "I'm going back to China now, so suck on that, Oyaji."
 Unbeknownst to the girl, the panda had gotten back up and was holding
 the street sign in one paw.  It swung it towards the girl.
 Call it divine inspiration, cause that's probably what it was, but
 something warned the girl of the attack ahead of time.  She ducked under
 the blow and caught the sign with her hand.  Standing back up, she turned
 around and faced the panda.
 "Now you listen to me, Oyaji, and you listen good.  I am not..."
  She swung the sign towards the panda's face.  It impacted with a clang.
 "...going to let you..." She did it again. "...ENGAGE me to some girl..."
 She did it again, this time there were murmur's from the gathering crowd.
  "...that I HAVE NEVER EVEN MET!"  She swung the sign at the panda to accentuate
 the last word, and it broke across it's skull.  The panda fell down, unconscious.
 The redhead turned around and glared at the crowd, which stepped back
 and began walking away.  The redhead could hear the people talking.
 "...and I thought Tomobiki was wierd."
 "Don't stare darling, or I'll hurt you."
 "Imagine!  Engaging a girl to a girl."
 The girl began to get slightly pissed at that one.
 After the crowd had the left, the redhead picked up the panda and slung
 it over her shoulder, impressive considering how much that thing had to weigh.
 Walking a few blocks, the girl found a bridge under which the ground
 was relativley dry.  Setting up camp, the girl stuffed the panda into one
 of the tents.  Heating a kettle of water, she dumped it on herself and turned
 into a good-looking young boy.
 Growling, Ranma crawled into his tent and tried to get some sleep.

~~Kcabhsalf~~

 "So you see Akane-chan... you and Ranma never met.  As such, he
 didn't fall in love with you.  Besides, all it would take would be a couple
 of deluxe okonomiyaki and Genma would stand behind Ranma's engagement to her,
 you know that as well as I do."  Urd was know standing on the other side of the
 room going through Soun's stash of alcoholic beverages.  "You'd think he'd keep
 something better on hand... sheesh."
 Akane had passed through anger and was now absolutely enraged.  She
 couldn't believe it, this so-called goddess was treating her like the entire
 thing was her fault!  Like it was her fault she got so mad at Ranma for being a
 pervert!
 This time however, Akane was not going to lose her cool.  "That doesn't
 explain why Ranma's living in Nerima... I mean, wouldn't he have left after he
 confronted his father like that?"
 Urd stood up, holding a sake bottle.  It was one of Soun's more expensive
 brands.  "He tried Akane-chan, Kami-sama knows he tried. His dad wasn't too
 happy about leaving, but Ranma managed to use just the right combination of blunt
 objects and sharp ones to convince him that it was the wisest thing to do.  Then,
 when he was on his way out of town, he ran into an old... acquaintance of his."
 "When you say old acquaintance... do you mean.."
 "No Akane-chan, Ukyo came a couple days after this."
 "A COUPLE DAYS! But it was a long time before she came here.  If she came
 here about three days after Ranma that would mean she got here before Shampoo even."
 "Apparently Ryoga was just as upset about his Jusenkyo curse then as he
 is now, or, was now."  Urd shook her head, temporal mechanics was just too much
 for her.  "Anyway, their fight attracted alot of attention.  Newspaper's included.
  Ukyo was just at the right place at the right time to see the paper.  I mean,
 a headline that reads 'Saotome/Hibiki brawl results in massive property damage'
 would kinda be noticed by someone who had sworn death on Ranma."
 "Ryoga's got a Jusenkyo curse?"
 "Whoops, forgot who I was talking to."  She leans down close so she's
 talking right to Akane's face and addresses her as one would a small child.  "No
 Akane, Ryoga is a perfectly normal, well-adjusted human being, there is absolutley
 nothing wrong with him at all."  Urd stood back up to her full height and muttered
 so that Akane couldn't hear.  "I hope you wise up someday."
 Akane seemed to buy Urd's explanation with a simple. "Oh."
 Urd popped open the bottle and took an impressive gulp, draining almost
 half of it.  "So, things happened pretty much the same with Ukyo... except that
 Ryoga gave her a little haircut with that belt of his.  Poor girl.  She challenged
 Ranma, he found out she was a girl, found out about the engagement, called her
 cute, and she fell for him again.  She opened up the Ucchan's a few days later,
 and Ranma figured with Ryoga dropping by at all hours that he could afford to
 stay here and his skills would stay up.  He still takes occasional training trips
 with his father, but now Ukyo comes along."  She tried to take another swig from
 the bottle she was holding and found it empty.  "Drat."
 She leaned back down to the cabinet and pulled out another, this one was
 slightly more expensive.  "Let's see... is there anything else you need to know...
 hmm."  Urd placed her hand to her chin in a thoughtful expression, which looked
 awfully out of place with the drink in her other hand.  She began to tick things
 off on her fingers.  "Okay, lesse here.  Kodachi's still after her man."  Akane
 looked about ready to speak up.  "Don't ask... it's more complicated than it was
 in your world.  This's some strong sake y'know, 's good stuff."
 "Is there anything that's changed for the better for me Urd?  Anything?"
 "Hmmm, oh yeah, Kuno's not after you anymore... that's good.  Although I
 personally don't mind a guy who's a wee bit over-affectionate.  The fact that he's
 an idiot doesn't count in his favor though."
 "How in the heck did that happen, I thought he'd be after me forever!"
 "Well..."  She put her hand on Akane shoulder.  Akane noticed that there was
 a fairly large pile of sake bottle behind her, and her breath reeked.  "...He started
 chasin' after the pig-tailed girl, see?"
 Akane nodded.
 "And then... he realized that she was under that foul sorcerer Saotome's
 evil spell.  He made it his obligation to free her... follow so far?"
 Akane nodded again, this was basically the way things happened in her past.
  It still didn't explain why he wasn't after HER anymore.
 "Well, Akane-chan... He, ya know Kuno..."  Urd seemed slightly tipsy.  "He
 found out that Ukyo was also under Ranma's spell... wish I had more sorcerers like
 Ranma, he's great with the ladies... *hic*."  Reminded of Ranma's infidelity Akane
 began to fume again, faced with a goddess who was downing her father's entire supply
 of sake didn't help much.  She noted that the pile seemed bigger than the last time
 she checked.  "Kuno found out that Ukyo was also under Ranma's spell.  He decided to
 try and free her as well.  He began to devote more and more time to getting both of
 them for himself.  Selfish nutcase..."
 Akane leaned over and checked her father's liquor cabinet.  Urd had
 apparently gone through half of it, and it was a pretty big cabinet.
 "Akane... I'll explain the rest of this later, right now.  Can I borrow your
 couch?"
 Akane stood up in a hurry.  "Why should I let you?  You've been nothing but
 trouble since I me..."  Akane's speech died off as Urd collapsed into an almost
 coma-like state on the couch.  Akane could hear her mumbling in her sleep.
  "Mmmm, 's good sake."
 Akane was absolutley astounded.  "Whod've thought a goddess could get drunk?"
 "I would have."
 "What the..."  Akane turned, startled at the voice, and found herself
 face to face with a girl who looked to be about twelve, she was dressed in a
 slim red and white outfit and had a hammer propped on her shoulder.  She had
 the same kind of marks on her face that Urd did.  Different color, and different
 shape, but the same basic marks.
 "You're a goddess too aren..."
 "I don't have time for this.  Out of the way."  The girl walked over to stand
 next to the couch and pulled a wierd helmet out of her dress.  She placed it on Urd's
 head.
 She pressed a button on the helmet and it began to glow.  After a few seconds
 Urd shot up to a sitting position and the little girl removed the helmet.
  "Skuld's instant hangover cure, patent pending."
 "What... where... huh?  Oh, hello squirt.  I was having a nice dream..."
 "Dad says stay away from the booze while you're working.  Bye now!"
  Skuld waved and walked into the kitchen, running water could be heard for a few
 seconds and then the doorway began to glow.  After it subsided there was no more
 sound from the kitchen.  Urd looked noticeably upset.
Akane checked the cabinet and noticed that all the sake was apparently back where
 it had been when Urd first showed up.
 Akane closed and locked the door to the cabinet and turned around to face
 Urd.  "So?  Before you tried to remove all the alcohol from my house."
 "Um... I forget, where was I?"
 "I think you were at the bit about Kuno?"
 "Oh, um, yeah.  Anyway, Kuno is now chasing after Ranma and Ukyo because
 he believes that they are under Ranma's evil spell.  He calls Ukyo his 'Goddess
 of okonomiyaki' and other such nonsense.  He thinks that she's madly in love with
 him.  Anything else you need to know you'll probably find out later.  Now if
 you'll excuse me, I have to talk to my father.  No drinking on duty... HAH!"
 That being said, Urd disappeared into the T.V. set.  Leaving Akane just as
 upset, angry, and lost as she had been feeling before Urd arrived.  The only
 difference was that now she knew that Ranma was in Nerima, he was with Ukyo, and
 she didn't have to worry about Kuno anymore.
 The door to the house opened and in stepped a rather daringly dressed Nabiki.
  She was wearing jean shorts and a tank-top "Hey Akane, Dad still asleep?"
 "Um, yeah, I think so... why?"
 Nabiki gave Akane a calculating look.  It quickly receded back into her
 emotionless mask.  "Good, c'mon.  I hope you're hungry, I brought dinner from
 that Nekohanten place.  They make good Ramen."
 "Umm, why isn't Kasumi cooking?"
 Nabiki arched an eyebrow at Akane, as though she'd just said something
 that didn't make any sense.  "Akane, you know perfectly well that Kasumi works
 over at the Kuno mansion every monday.  How else would we pay our bills?  I still
 haven't found that redhead or gotten that okonomiyaki chef to let me take pictures
 of them yet and Kuno doesn't buy your's anymore.  The other boys at school do,
 but they can't afford the prices that I used to charge him."  Nabiki stared down
 at her hand as it clenched into a fist almost of it's own accord.  "Kuno no Baka,
 why'd you have to... um, anyway.  Here."  Nabiki handed Akane a box with a set of
 chopsticks attached, she opened it to find a bowl of Ramen.  Akane figured that
 since neither Shampoo nor Cologne knew her now that it was safe to eat.
 Nabiki was the first to finish her food and ran upstairs after doing so.
  When she re-emerged she was holding her camera in one hand and a few pieces of
 cloth in the other.  She noticed that Akane was finished when she reached to bottom
 of the stairs.
 She motioned towards the dojo with her head.  "C'mon Akane, it's time for
 that photo shoot."
 Akane head whipped up in shock at that.  "WHAT?"
 "Akane, not only did you promise me, but if you want to eat at all next week
 you will be going through with this.  C'mon."
 <I did WHAT?>  "I... okay."
 Nabiki tossed her the red thing that she was holding in her hand.  "Don't
 worry Akane, I don't sell pornography.  We don't need money badly enough for me to
 do that to you..."
 Akane blushed from her hairline to her toes as she walked into the dojo.
 Nabiki waited for a moment before following, she finished her last sentence
 to herself, making certain that Akane was not within earshot.  "..yet."
 She wiped the stray tear from her face with the back of her hand and made
 her way towards the dojo.

End part 2

Author's post-script:  Where is this going? I do not know... but I do know that
 there is more in store.  Chapter 3: Forever my Ran-chan, will probably be a while
 in it's release, it's going to be longer... much, much, longer.

"With a promise of stranger things to come"
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